For writing this week we had to make a poem about really anything so I did mine about lock down and we had to add in some writing tools such as alliteration and onomatopoeia this is my poem:
What would you write your poem about?
Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
For writing this week we had to make a poem about really anything so I did mine about lock down and we had to add in some writing tools such as alliteration and onomatopoeia this is my poem:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Nice work Ryan,
ReplyDeleteI love the poetic devices you have included in your poem. I am glad that it sounds like your lockdown is going well!
Miss Holden